Below is Part 2 of my strange boxing/monster comic. I’m not quite sure how I feel about it.
What I Like
To be honest, now that I see this on a computer there isn’t too much I’m a fan of. I suppose I like that I actually made panels and used a ruler and all that. I like the way I drew the face of the dude getting hit in the second panel. I also like that I actually finished this one to a degree, oh and panel five looks kinda sick.
What I Wish I Did Differently
I wish I had been more consistent with some of my line work while using the inks. I think the story itself is pretty obvious, but using tiny pens and then much bigger pens, I think I could have done a better job with that. For example, I think that panel six looks very strange compared to the other five. In panel four I would have centered it a little more, in panel three I would have made our boxer’s fist bigger. Gosh, I dunno, there’s just so much that I could have done differently. Good thing is that I don’t any of the artisstic decisions actually hurt the story.
I’d just like to give a shoutout to every comic book artist EVER! Son of a bitch just using that f*ing ruler on my 8.5×11 piece of computer made me want to stop. I suppose when it comes to drawing I’m not very detail oriented. I think I’m going to stick to stick figures from now on… Anyway, let me know what you guys think!